03/03/2016
Our group received feedback for the story that we're going to make an animated sequence for. The tutors told us that it would be better if the puns relate to the butter rather than be puns about random food items.
Our group received feedback for the story that we're going to make an animated sequence for. The tutors told us that it would be better if the puns relate to the butter rather than be puns about random food items.
They also told us to find out how butter acts when bent, twist and melted to have a clear idea of how butter works for research. Me, Jonathan and Michelle C. borrowed some clay and planned out how the character could work. Our group still has to design the character but we do have initial ideas/concepts to work with just to work out how the character would work. I came up with different concepts and also ideas on how to explore the design for the character. We also have a character profile to work with provided by Mikayla.
Here is the revised script by Mikayla and Michelle Z. It's not yet finished but it's close being finalized.
Here is the revised script by Mikayla and Michelle Z. It's not yet finished but it's close being finalized.
SCRIPT
SERIES OF SHOTS OF A POT BOILING, A FRIDGE, AND HANDS CHOPPING FOOD.
EST. SHOT OF APARTMENT KITCHEN; A YOUNG LADY IS BUSY PREPARING A MEAL.
CLOSE UP ON HER EXPRESSION AS SHE CHOPS, WHERE SHE PAUSES TO GRAB SOMETHING - AN INGREDIENT - ONLY TO REALISE IT’S NOT THERE.
P.O.V. SHOT AS SHE LOOKS AROUND THE BENCH. SWITCHES TO A MID SHOT AS SHE SIGHS, LOOKING TO THE FRIDGE.
YOUNG LADY:
“Here we go…”
SHOT OF HER CROUCHING DOWN IN FRONT OF THE FRIDGE; SHE REACHES AND OPENS THE DOOR. SHOT CHANGES TO SHOW THE FRIDGES INTERIOR.
BUTTER:
“Oh, hello~!”
CLOSE UP ON HER EXPRESSION - A MIX OF EXHAUSTION AND DREAD, AS SHE TURNS TO LOOK IN THE FRIDGE DOOR. SWITCHES TO OVER THE SHOULDER SHOT.
BUTTER:
“We meet again.”
A SMOOTH VOICE SPEAKS, WITH A PANNING VIEW OVER THE SHOULDER, WE SEE A STICK OF BUTTER COME INTO VIEW.
ZOOM IN TO SEE THE BUTTER WAVING AND SMILING.
THE LADY STARES AT HIM UNIMPRESSED.
YOUNG LADY:
“Not by choice…”
THE BUTTER FEIGNS HURT, HOLDING HIS HAND TO HIS HEART.
BUTTER:
“Oh, you’re almost colder than this fridge. But - is that cooking I smell?”
BUTTER SNIFFS.
BUTTER:
“Hm, wouldn’t it taste better with me?”
BUTTER GESTURES AT HIMSELF.
BUTTER:
“Or should I say… butter?”
CLOSE UP OF LADY GOING TO PROTEST. SHOT RETURNS TO BUTTER.
BUTTER:
“I’m bready for you.”
WOMAN LOOKS BACK AT BENCH TO HER MEAL WHERE BUTTER CLEARLY IS NOT NEEDED.
SLIGHTLY PANICKED, HE WATCHES AS SHE SIGHS AND GOES TO GRAB MORE INGREDIENTS FROM THE FRIDGE.
YOUNG LADY:
“Well…”
BUTTER:
“…”
YOUNG LADY SIGHS, SIDE ON SHOT OF HER AND BUTTER.
YOUNG LADY:
“Look, I’m flattered, but…”
BUTTER:
“B-But you can’t churn me down; I’m high-end creamy blend!”
YOUNG LADY SMILES, IN A CONDESCENDING WAY.
YOUNG LADY:
“And I’m lactose intolerant.”
FADE TO BLACK WITH SHOT OF BUTTER, LOOKING HEARTBROKEN, AS THE FRIDGE CLOSES.
END
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